Don’t Judge a Rollercoaster by Its Cover!
Don’t Judge a Rollercoaster by Its Cover!
My family and I were exploring the concrete jungle of Vegas. We saw this tiny little rollercoaster at a casino/hotel. We decided to try this small ride. As we were in line, I was joking with my brother about how wimpy this teeny weenie ride was going to be. As we hopped on into the rollercoaster’s not so comfy seat and was waiting for the ride to start, I was still smirking and thinking how weak and kiddy the ride was going to be. When suddenly, the ride shoots forward like a space shuttle launching full speed. As I recovered from that surprise, the ride shot underground and it became pitch-black, but the quickly shot up like a bullet from a gun. Then the ride went up a ramp that made you feel like you were going up the Eifel Tower. Just as I thought the ride was over, the ride went really fast, backwards! I went back down to that pithch-black tunnel, witch was pretty cool. When the ride was finally over, I got out half relieved and half wanting more. As I walked away from the ride my body felt as if it was still on that rocket of a ride.
September 25th, 2008 at 2:24 pm
Good story. I would recommend fixing the grammar mistakes, add a few more details, and maybe lengthen it a bit, like what you were doing when you entered the park and before you rode the coaster.